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This is definitely one of my lower quality short stories. Too many conflicting ideas.

    I and my companions came to that despicable kingdom, and we were sorely disappointed.
    We rode there. I, Moros, harbinger of the impending doom, rode upon the steed of ruin, bringing swift judgement. I rode with my companions: Morana, mistress of plague and death. Mordred, the creator of betrayers. Jarogniew, avatar of energy and destruction. And Zelophehad, master of terror and dread.
    We came to that kingdom, burning their crop upon our passage, and we rode to the capital of their mortal country. There, we slaughtered so many. They begged us to spare them. They begged us to spare their children. But their screams were the most terrible. The loudest, with the innocence of their minuscule existence wiped away like a spot of mud.
    We left that kingdom, few survivors, so they might bring us their sacrifices for their survival; so we might not ride down from our mountains again.
    But they thought differently.
    They had told the neighboring kingdoms of what had happened, praying to the heavens for help. And so the weak Seraphim descended upon us to rip our hearts out, with the aid of their sheep; the mortals.
    But little do those mortals know, the Seraphim did not come down wholesomely. Those pawns came down to please their puppet master. They have no care for the naïve mortals. The blind creatures.
    They seized our mountains, with a thirst only to be satisfied with blood. The blood of my brothers and sisters.
    The only reason those cowardly creatures had won was because Sagitarrium, the tyrant’s archer, had come down to kill my siblings.
    And the only reason I survived was because I am the inevitable; I cannot be stopped.
    But even so, here I am now. I, here upon my castle, on the lone mountain. Here, where I watched as pillars of brimstone and smoke grew from four other castles on four other mountains. The red, orange, and green flames, licking the masonry, the black and white smoke signifying the end of those I called brothers and sisters, not even carrion entering through their gates to feast upon their rotting flesh.
    Here I stand, alone, now ready to wreak havoc upon the cowards. The havoc that would have come anyway. For, although they are dead, their essence is still present, thought to have died with the old traditions, but is even more a part of the new traditions.
    And in their hedonism, their pride, their devotion, and their fear, I will have my vengeance. The mortals, having tried to kill what they said needed to die, had only sown the seed of their destruction from them. Their essence only grows stronger the more they fight it. Just as I will grow stronger the more they fight me.
    I am immortal. I rule the slaughter. And side-by-side we ride.

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This was way longer than expected. Anyway, here's a link to the good man's page, Panjoool, and I hope you might've enjoyed and/or learned from this.
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    I and my companions came to that despicable kingdom, and we were sorely disappointed.
    We rode there. I, Moros, harbinger of the impending doom, rode upon the steed of ruin, bringing swift judgement. I rode with my companions: Morana, mistress of plague and death. Mordred, the creator of betrayers. Jarogniew, avatar of energy and destruction. And Zelophehad, master of terror and dread.
    We came to that kingdom, burning their crop upon our passage, and we rode to the capital of their mortal country. There, we slaughtered so many. They begged us to spare them. They begged us to spare their children. But their screams were the most terrible. The loudest, with the innocence of their minuscule existence wiped away like a spot of mud.
    We left that kingdom, few survivors, so they might bring us their sacrifices for their survival; so we might not ride down from our mountains again.
    But they thought differently.
    They had told the neighboring kingdoms of what had happened, praying to the heavens for help. And so the weak Seraphim descended upon us to rip our hearts out, with the aid of their sheep; the mortals.
    But little do those mortals know, the Seraphim did not come down wholesomely. Those pawns came down to please their puppet master. They have no care for the naïve mortals. The blind creatures.
    They seized our mountains, with a thirst only to be satisfied with blood. The blood of my brothers and sisters.
    The only reason those cowardly creatures had won was because Sagitarrium, the tyrant’s archer, had come down to kill my siblings.
    And the only reason I survived was because I am the inevitable; I cannot be stopped.
    But even so, here I am now. I, here upon my castle, on the lone mountain. Here, where I watched as pillars of brimstone and smoke grew from four other castles on four other mountains. The red, orange, and green flames, licking the masonry, the black and white smoke signifying the end of those I called brothers and sisters, not even carrion entering through their gates to feast upon their rotting flesh.
    Here I stand, alone, now ready to wreak havoc upon the cowards. The havoc that would have come anyway. For, although they are dead, their essence is still present, thought to have died with the old traditions, but is even more a part of the new traditions.
    And in their hedonism, their pride, their devotion, and their fear, I will have my vengeance. The mortals, having tried to kill what they said needed to die, had only sown the seed of their destruction from them. Their essence only grows stronger the more they fight it. Just as I will grow stronger the more they fight me.
    I am immortal. I rule the slaughter. And side-by-side we ride.

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AlfaWF Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2017  New Deviant
*Tap blade on your shoulder*
"Thou now art watchers of Alfa"
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Aye!
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AlfaWF Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2017  New Deviant
Now go and see the wonders (not really) I've made thus far.
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:heart: 
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Omg I feel so bad

I forgot to watch you..
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Don't give me that face, child.
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DeadKnight1 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 14, 2017
I honestly wasn't offended by you not watching. I would completely understand if you didn't enjoy my content, and therefore didn't watch, let alone not even checking it out; no real reason to. Or is this just part of that sort of online etiquette thing I picked up on you adhering to?
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Thanks for the fave.
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